Thursday, January 24, 2008

As My Love Eternal Comments

Rating: 4.1

My love alone empty darkness.
Our last kiss remind of the blue sky
pointed on the horizon empty and gray.
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Mary Wismer
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Janri Gogeshvili 25 February 2008

The poetic Emotional aspiration involves … beautifully …

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Thad Wilk 24 January 2008

Hi Mary! ! A brilliant work of art here beautifully written poem! ! Best regards: Friend Thad *10plus*! !

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Howard Johnson 24 January 2008

Wow! this has to be one of the most beautiful write that I have read, 'Day dreams longing for your wild embrace'..Powerful feelings stated through-out each stanza..The final lines lets the reader explore? ? .The what is next? After that kiss. Excellent write Howard

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