Saturday, December 15, 2007

As My Image Fades Comments

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As my image fades
You love my voice
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shannon wright
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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

A witty portrayal of the whimsical and temperamental nature of love, well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Shannon.

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Rhiannon Scase 25 January 2008

Truly powerful! How you turn such great emotion into fine art is amazing! Rhiannon*

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Donall Dempsey 18 January 2008

Wow! Powerful stuff! And wonderful construction with all that incremental repetition pushing one over the edge...agghhhh! Who would have thought sadness could be so beautiful. love Donall Donall

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Elya Thorn 16 January 2008

Saying good bye, that's always hard. I love the way you're written this poem! Strong and flowing!

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Robert Howard 08 January 2008

A very powerful, astute and loving description of willed separation.

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