As My Heart Fails Comments

pieces of the heart being crushed into nothing creating itself a monster. With no heart to love and no heart to care there is only a empty shell wandering hopelessly in this world causing hatred and evil because of the boy who destroyed it so long ago. really a master piece poem with very sweet logic and the way you done it is really interesting and impressive and even heart and soul touching... reality, and cause and effects are inter relating to each others..loved it..well done 10.10

A true masterpeice. Have you considered being a poet? I mean you already are but I mean as a carrer.

Thanks dear bozeman for sharing this piece with us. I consider this a real poetry.