Monday, February 18, 2008

As Mist Does Roll Across The Field Comments

Rating: 4.6

As mist does roll across the field
And drapes the lowly chestnut tree
With silken gown while winter's chill
Now grips the frozen air,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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C.R. Clark 21 December 2008

You have painted here a beautiful winter time picture, my friend. There is much beauty in winter that is often overlooked by many folks. I have always loved winter time. I like your phrase 'As nature now does sleep.' Excellent write...10 Richard

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Ernestine Northover 25 February 2008

Great rhyming here Andrew, I loved the read and the contents so much. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 22 February 2008

I'm trying to work out the rhyming pattern here, but I've never really understood formats I write a lot of a, b, a, b stuff, can you tell me what this is please Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 18 February 2008

A lovely and capturing poem Andrew! A pleasure to read thank you! ! ! *10*! ! Best wishes : friend Thad

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