Tuesday, April 7, 2009

As Love Carries... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I carry within shells
Indescribable feelings
Amidst luscious dreams
I carry unraveling memories
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 August 2009

Such an amazing poem

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Sabrina Jubahar 17 April 2009

one of the best poems i've ever read.....! ! !

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that's soooooooooooooo sweet :) loved it tons a lot :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

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T S 13 April 2009

Amazing write... full of expression and honesty..a very spectacular write. 10/10

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Joseph Poewhit 13 April 2009

The poem reflects the robust nature of your soul and heart very well.

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Naidz Ladia 13 April 2009

a very wonderful poem expressing undescibable feelings..feelings of sweet honesty, feelings of humble dedication..i am so speechless for this..this is excellent..this is superb, , , i really really like the flow of expressing your feelings here...there is no limitations....meaning, it is clear...very transparent...very beautiful.....smart and presentable... naizz

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Chad Robinson 10 April 2009

10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thats all I can say.

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Lynda Robson 10 April 2009

Beautiful write Ahmad, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 April 2009

It is beautiful your, or of your hero, love for the saint princess. With this reciprocity, it differently is. Today doesn't love and tomorrow - who does it know? I like your poem, it is sincere and beautiful, very well written.10 v. -I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Sally Plumb 10 April 2009

this piece of writing is absolutely beautiful.

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Mimi Fakhira 09 April 2009

Beautiful and perfect! Keep writing..10.

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Louis Rams 09 April 2009

this is a very deep and beautiful love story and the way you express it is beyond compare. GR8 a ten

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Omar Ibrahim 09 April 2009

wow! ! ! it's perect! ! !

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Anthony Foster 09 April 2009

Brilliant poetic and discriptive.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 09 April 2009

Absolutely Amazing 10!

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 April 2009

There are only two words that I can say in reference to this piece. WELL SAID. I just don't know how else to characterize it. It had both beauty and a flavored charm that is worthy of all true loves. Yes, WELL SAID. GW62

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Patti Masterman 08 April 2009

Very nice writing full of unusual images.

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Joseph Poewhit 08 April 2009

The flow of music is keeping it's beat.

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Ravi A 08 April 2009

Divine princess... this is a classic end. The poem is a good expression of your heart. Easily readable. But what is 'undisputed tolerance'. It means that there is 'disputaed tolerance' also. Tolerance itself means that we are tolerating something which we actually don't like. We needn't tolerate anything that we love or like. See the difference.

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Pablo Cruise 08 April 2009

A Love summation of heart and soul. Love so often is overplayed but here it carries and carries and carries.......................................

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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