I carry within shells
Indescribable feelings
Amidst luscious dreams
I carry unraveling memories
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that's soooooooooooooo sweet :) loved it tons a lot :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)
Amazing write... full of expression and honesty..a very spectacular write. 10/10
The poem reflects the robust nature of your soul and heart very well.
a very wonderful poem expressing undescibable feelings..feelings of sweet honesty, feelings of humble dedication..i am so speechless for this..this is excellent..this is superb, , , i really really like the flow of expressing your feelings here...there is no limitations....meaning, it is clear...very transparent...very beautiful.....smart and presentable... naizz
It is beautiful your, or of your hero, love for the saint princess. With this reciprocity, it differently is. Today doesn't love and tomorrow - who does it know? I like your poem, it is sincere and beautiful, very well written.10 v. -I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt
this is a very deep and beautiful love story and the way you express it is beyond compare. GR8 a ten
There are only two words that I can say in reference to this piece. WELL SAID. I just don't know how else to characterize it. It had both beauty and a flavored charm that is worthy of all true loves. Yes, WELL SAID. GW62
Divine princess... this is a classic end. The poem is a good expression of your heart. Easily readable. But what is 'undisputed tolerance'. It means that there is 'disputaed tolerance' also. Tolerance itself means that we are tolerating something which we actually don't like. We needn't tolerate anything that we love or like. See the difference.
A Love summation of heart and soul. Love so often is overplayed but here it carries and carries and carries.......................................
Such an amazing poem