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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 3 hrs · Unlike · 1

Gotta think on this one. Natalie King13 minutes ago Great poem. God does have a lot if requests. How is it that we all want him to do for us when so many don't do anything for him? Comment +1 Irene Meader13 minutes ago Okay I don't usually review or comment on peoples works, because I don't think they should be judged whether they are good or bad but since I have to on here then I will try my best. I am not a religious person so it kind of stinks that I got your poem to review but like I said I will do my best. I think the poem had good flow and the wording is good. Everything that was said seems to fit together and it an easy read. So keep up the good work! : D

Good Job. Irene Meader13 minutes ago Okay I don't usually review or comment on peoples works, because I don't think they should be judged whether they are good or bad but since I have to on here then I will try my best. I am not a religious person so it kind of stinks that I got your poem to review but like I said I will do my best. I think the poem had good flow and the wording is good. Everything that was said seems to fit together and it an easy read. So keep up the good work! : D

decent. Adara Anderson16 minutes ago It would be great if you carefully review and do a spell check. Not for misspelled words just for words missing mostly..

Good Hannah O'Brien28 minutes ago Well done

If we believe in God There will be no worry or load