As Long As They Both Breathe Comments
Sides come together in a fury of battle cries
On one side, she sits, and forgives
The evils that have been done to her
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That poem was really strong, I could feel the intensity. Great work, smiles N hugs, Rissa
Whoa, this was incredible! Definately your best work, I'd say. It was so good! ~Amber~
A strong impression of love you present here Guarded Heart. I thoroughly enjoyed the journey, very age of chivalry feel to it. Smiling at you, Tai
Must I say anything on this wonderful peice...I alomst got two stories from it, yet both are of the same derivitive, very nice indeed.
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9/6/2025 1:24:04 AM # 1.0.0
an amazing story this is... you have told it well.