Monday, June 4, 2007

As Long As I'M Around Comments

Rating: 5.0

nobody can hurt you
as long as I'm around
if they try to keep you down
I'll get you off the ground
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Jade Leven
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Laurelin M. Estel 25 August 2007

I love this poem, so simple, yet so powerful. i'm sure that Kate, Isaiah, and Elise feel very loved; p

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Kathleen Alm 24 June 2007

I love this poem because you can tell that a lot of thought and heart went into writing it. I'm sure Kate and Isaiah would feel very very very very very special when they read this poem. Hint, hint.

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Gold Flower 07 June 2007

This poem is so down to Earth! I love it! Keep writing! Lilly

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