Friday, October 19, 2012

As Long As I Have You Comments

Rating: 4.5

I dropped on my wobbling knees
Praying to help me go through this
I am asking for guidance and mercy
To face all this calmly and accordingly...
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Aliw Mismanos
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Xelam Kan™ 04 January 2013

Wow fabulous, very poignant and thought provoking..... Beautifully rhymed..... Each stanza carry different aspect like waves in ocean.... Well balanced in structure as well.....thumb up

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Ketan Hukare 01 January 2013

Well Done! ! Indeed your poem is worth catching attention. And I really liked it! ! !

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

A sin of anger is eating me alive What a verse! really wonderful thought! Well done! ! ! ! my vote is 9.Congrats.

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