I dropped on my wobbling knees
Praying to help me go through this
I am asking for guidance and mercy
To face all this calmly and accordingly...
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Well Done! ! Indeed your poem is worth catching attention. And I really liked it! ! !
A sin of anger is eating me alive What a verse! really wonderful thought! Well done! ! ! ! my vote is 9.Congrats.
Wow fabulous, very poignant and thought provoking..... Beautifully rhymed..... Each stanza carry different aspect like waves in ocean.... Well balanced in structure as well.....thumb up