Monday, October 18, 2004

As Long As I Am Alive....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Always, your soul reside in my heart
Our love is not like gloomy, bright like sunshine
We share our wonderful feelings without hesitation
I immerse you completely into me when you give me yourself
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‘You purified my soul and brought out my emotions’ Love is Pure and hallows others…and oneself too Fine diction of emotion 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Luwi Habte 21 September 2009

dear ravi this is so nice and lovely piece your poem are really wonderful well done there luwi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2009

will always love you even when the rain wash me out or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die lovely feelings inthe heart...oenmust strive vry honestly in love.....vey good poem readmien homeboound...come home...dirvorce...(use rating also.from 1 to 10)

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