Friday, October 9, 2015

As Long As Comments

Rating: 5.0

As long as I love all other men,
beasts and birds and the crawling insects,
the muslin that covers and protects the earth,
the sun and the moon and the twinkling stars,
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

I know i shall survive! Nice piece of work.

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Valsa George 13 October 2015

How you have finally brought out the danger of firearms and violence and the beauty of love through the camouflaging tracks of romance! Wonderful poem with a lofty message!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2015

Wonderful imagery. A great poem so nicely presented......10

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Fantastic satire, I liked the building blocks of your poem..... But the embryo of the day, is sleeping in the seeds of hate, selfishness and thirst of power, ........Superb lines......Another thoughtful poem.10++++

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Khalid Saifullah 09 October 2015

A great poem, a message of time................................

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Kelly Kurt 09 October 2015

Poignant and very well written. This goes on my favorite list.

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