As long as I love all other men,
beasts and birds and the crawling insects,
the muslin that covers and protects the earth,
the sun and the moon and the twinkling stars,
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How you have finally brought out the danger of firearms and violence and the beauty of love through the camouflaging tracks of romance! Wonderful poem with a lofty message!
Wonderful imagery. A great poem so nicely presented......10
Fantastic satire, I liked the building blocks of your poem..... But the embryo of the day, is sleeping in the seeds of hate, selfishness and thirst of power, ........Superb lines......Another thoughtful poem.10++++
A great poem, a message of time................................
I know i shall survive! Nice piece of work.