Thursday, July 4, 2013

As Light As Feather Comments

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Pelting stones on the sweetest fruit,
Painfully stood tree watching it.

Words of stone thrown,
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Tree is a best example of tolerance power as it stands painfully still in spite of pelting several stones at it and in exchange it gives sweet fruits to the pelter. So also we have to make our heart strong in spite of several hurdles and jealousy and in spite of this we should offer thanks for which we shall feel a stone as light as feather. A great philosophical write.10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 August 2014

Words may make or break but the man hurt should have courage and patience to digest it.......here one needs to exercise wisdom........Written very nicely.........Geetha

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Valsa George 10 July 2013

A beautiful write... Geetha! If our hearts are made strong enough to withstand all taunts and wounds from others, we have conqured them and established victory over them.! A little patience shown and timely restraint exhibited can work wonders! In this context, I invite you to read my poem - Nuggets of Wisdom, No.4. Thanks for your sweet comment!

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Dinesan Madathil 07 July 2013

Excellent rendering of a notion great! If you don`t mind spare a little time for taking care of the sequence of tenses used so as to impress the native writers in English. All the best ahead.

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