Sunday, July 20, 2008

As Life And Soul Go Comments

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When life leaves a body
With it goes the soul
Just the need to be free
The need to reach its goal
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Carrie Sprouse 01 August 2008

This poem is awsume, i really like it

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Sabrina Helphrey 20 July 2008

i love how u explain that the soul drifts off to something better and leaves the body to decay over time great poem keep up the great work- Sabrina

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BEAUTIFUL! ! oh em gee, pay..this poem doesnt rhyme! ! wow, thats a first :) iloveyoubabygirl!

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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