Wednesday, September 9, 2015

As It Was Never Before Comments

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Heart is melting like candels,
as it was never before,
might be you taught it to love,
to make devotions of feelings,
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Arihant kumar goyal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2015

Lovely.. i never knew it before...10 I couldn’t take off my eyes When she tried To explain through unheard language But I held it with complete courage “I shall try to swim” that was only thought And it was continuously fought It was all that I understood with essence And I accepted her fully with presence

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Kelly Kurt 09 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Arihant. Thank you

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Arihant Kumar Goyal 09 September 2015

thank you so much for your nice comments

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 09 September 2015

Love blinds us all. yet we see things in a new light - A light as it was never before. Very beautiful lines.

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Arihant Kumar Goyal 09 September 2015

thank you so much for your appreciation

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Fabrizio Frosini 09 September 2015

and... WELCOME at P.H... :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 09 September 2015

- - - - - rendering your poem (its 1st part) into Italian..: As It Was Never Before Heart is melting like candels, as it was never before, might be you taught it to love, to make devotions of feelings, as it was never before, to flutter like a star, in the whole over of night, ... Come Mai Prima D'Ora Il cuore si scioglie come fosse candela, come mai prima d'ora, forse perché gli hai insegnato ad amare, ad essere devoto ai sentimenti, come mai prima d'ora, a tremolare come una stella per tutta la durata della notte ...

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