As It Should Be Comments
The business of the day
is almost finished but
the energy allotted
to this day is not yet
...
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As the day comes to a halt, the night slowly casts her spell and we with all nature take our place in sweet slumber, As it should be. Nice poem my friend.
That's it exactly. The half-world at rest in peace. If only those words REST and could describe the waking world.
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8/18/2025 2:16:32 PM # 1.0.0
nice, daniel. the phrasing and rhythm catch the feel of the winding down at the end of the day. likewise the pictures your provide... if you haven't already caught it, tenth line down, the not then, no? ... i like this. -glen