As it rain I listen to the melody
From the roof through a hole
It falls inside into the empty bucket
It falls in timed drops
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One of the best poems i've ever read...well potrayed and that sound still echoes in my ears...asiliphakamise iflag yihlo.
i like when it`s raining.... your poems are quite interesting for me. they have a special melody... and it sounds greatly in my opinion. well, if you know some musicians you can create useful and true songs.and i`ll listen to them with pleasure. so, keep it up, you are a true talent
Hahahaha..i like how you end in each stanza with sounds especially the last one hahaha, it is a nice poem and yes rain always inspired many in each dropp of water and the melody..could be one of the best lullaby sang by nature..it's a nice poem my friend, keep it up n write more_Unwritten Soul
The rythm is amazing!