Friday, April 28, 2006

As It Happens... Comments

Rating: 5.0

As it happens, I suppose
I am not gay, if it matters at all
And hold almost secret and certainly close
Each memory of you - knowing some
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Frank Bana
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Original Unknown Girl 26 April 2007

This is such a candid write and I love how you reconcile your feelings towards this man, whether you loved him or not does not matter. The fact that you openly express how you feel/felt shows true depth of character and for that I admire you. Great strength in this poem. HG: -) xx

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Pia Andersson 23 July 2006

Oh this is excellent..a man writing to another man..friends and former rivals at the same time.You write wiht such style..brilliant! ! .I dont know why but i get the same feeling from this poem as I get from Leonard Cohens song 'Famous blue raincoat' Wshing you joy-Pia

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Ruby Root 07 July 2006

Hi Frank Did people think you were gay (ha ha) that is too funny. Your poem was fun to read loving and caring. I really enjoyed it. You are great writer. With good emotions and imagery. Take care

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Anna Cellmer 01 May 2006

How it's beautiful romantic picture of deep feelings you keep inside, it was real pleasure to step here for a while, good luck in everything you do it's just wonderful write and mind and thoughts

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