Tuesday, September 22, 2009

As It All Collides Comments

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As the moonlit beam crosses my window
While the clouds float away from here
As the dust settles and rain starts
While time slowly drifts on by there
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Tai Chi Italy 24 September 2009

AS it alll collides, take yourself to your favourite place, feel the sun on your face and envisage every detail of the woman you love. You will sleep soundly in her ethereal arms till dawn charms the bird to your window once more. Just a thought from Tai...amazed and inspired by this fine freedom flowing poem. Smiling at you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2009

As night takes its hold once more While you know this horrid fear As you beg again to be left alone While you hope this is the last tear As it all collides.................it is going to be new begining when night takes its holdand waits for brighter tomorrow..... yhoumay be left alone but soon to be found among all... beautiful poem with good message....10 read mine yes to to... you go alone... i am disgrace

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