Saturday, September 16, 2006

As Is Of Us Comments

Rating: 5.0

From a conjured thought, is fathomed and forgotten
Diminishing rust, of a partial intrigue be begotten
Crimson wine sways sweetly, across a full body
Relishing of these passions, for that of an eternity
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Marilyn Shepperson 18 September 2006

Brilliant poem; love the last verse. Your comments on mine would be much appreciated. By the way, your other commentor, is also one of my fans and lives in wrexham! ! ! Small world ain't it.

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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

Great finish - and so true. Loved the poem and you've written it brilliantly, Steve

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