Friday, July 13, 2012

As In My Thoughts I Want To Be Comments

Rating: 4.5

Setting my arms together.....
Or relaxing myself in chair,
I get to know, I'm restless....
A feeling haunts me....
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Shivani Yadav
COMMENTS
V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Shivani this is a natural conflict of every creature but there are a few like you who can describe it so vividly Nicely composed Thanks I invite you to read my poems

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Captain Cur 17 July 2012

I loved this sweet, expressive and honest poem. Good work!

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Black On Black Arts 17 July 2012

this poem brings thoughts to life this poem is almost as beautiful as you one day i hope to write with such passion and feeling

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Payal Parande 16 July 2012

absolutely spectacular so many nice Questions..... for the first time no one would get annoyed by them they will only get fascinated......beautiful, loved it love payal

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