Wednesday, January 31, 2007

As If Comments

Rating: 5.0

As if,
This love was just a trip;
You pack all your things
When the wind sadly shifts
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Lynn Grassette
COMMENTS
Jerry Hughes 04 March 2007

...succinct and meaningful, not one wasted word

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Anabel just Anabel 05 February 2007

hey pretty good...really well written... :)

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jim hogg 31 January 2007

Effective structure for this content. Very clearly expressed indignation. Thoroughly good writing.

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