Tuesday, June 2, 2009

As If I Could Never Comments

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If I could never love you, like I really should
Give you that kind of love, that I once could
So many excuses, I was not willing to try
All this wasted time and now I wonder why
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Tia Maria
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Chris Mendros 01 August 2009

This is very well written and conveys a very sensible approach to an otherwise illogical subject. As if anyone ever could...

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Tia, i applaud you. We all dream of a love like this and for one, i wasnt able to find the words to express. Thank you so much for sharing your talent :)

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As the other readers have said Tia, I hope it works out for you. You deserve it too, with your level head and poetry that types your needs into your heart. Thanks for sharing. 10 Karin Anderson

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Thad Wilk 02 June 2009

Hi Tia! ! I love this poem, a clearly eloquent write! ! I don't think you are asking for too much , from The one you love. A delight to read thank you! ! Best wishes, , *10*! Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 June 2009

Ah Tia, good luck and may you find what you seek, always Andy 10

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Tom Balch 02 June 2009

Nice write from the heart Tia, if real, hope it works out, if only a poem, nice write, regards Tom

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