As If I Am Your Dream Comments

Nicely done. Where do we separate our fantasy from reality, and which do we prefer to live in. In the realm of the Romantics with this piece.

There is a marked element of mysticism here, which coupled with a string of beautiful words casts a spell on the reader. I quote a few lines: Time fills with tears /...Let us surrender / the sky we stole / from the gods.

Confession and repentance nicely written.

Nice poem with a strong message. Loved it.

Let us surrender the sky we stole from the gods. So wise, so true, so beautifull!

Let us surrender The sky we stole from the God. Fantastic imagery and very excellent diction. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

'My blood turns to wine.'

Yours is a truly beautiful soul, David.

My kind of poem, David - short, but packed with powerful imagery and perspective. Linda :)

Truly inspired work. Don't be in a hurry to give that sky back...

Marvelous work. Thank you, David.

Nice write David! Thanks for sharing! *10*! Thad

beautiful imagery, thanks.