Friday, July 29, 2016

As If Forever … 2907-2k16 Comments

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The winds roar ceaseless across this endless plain
Blowing the sands an dunes there then here again

Standing mute and silent on the deathly flat
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Yasmin 29 May 2018

Read again via FB and enjoyed the wonderful description

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saadat tahir 29 May 2018

am honoured maam... kind words and it encourages me thanx

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Elena Sandu 09 February 2017

To feel the wind, to see with the eyes of an eagle, admire the Oryx such a great joy which tells us a story, of the richness of our earth, beauty abundance and life that we think is forever. Your wonderfully penned poem gives us the wish to care for our world to protect the life on earth, thank you so much for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2016

Here winds blow whistling with a madness seized As if forever we had life, its bounties for us leased... is beautiful. A poem that gives feeling of goodness as one go on line after line. Very nice.

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Saadat Tahir 20 December 2016

thanx.. i am honored sir!

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Bharati Nayak 01 October 2016

The beauty and the sweet flow of words hold my breath.Thanks for sharing.

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Yasmin Khan 29 July 2016

Descriptive and pictorial, transporting the reader but before he may get lost in the swirls of dust, there comes the lady bird and an oasis to the rescue....! ! ! ! ! ....impressive indeed, KUDOS!

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