Wednesday, August 21, 2019

As If Dreams Come True Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even I know there are a hundred billion stars in the night sky
but you'd say perspective is an invisible concept,
no matter how many truths come to me in my dreams.
You're not as invisible as you think you are
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Scott J. Shepard
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 August 2019

such a nice piece of work, Scott. You may like to read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Hannington Mumo 21 August 2019

A thought-provoking piece indeed...penned with sublime poetic wit!

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Julia Luber 21 August 2019

Interesting reflection on perception and star numbers and a sense that all these merge together somehow to be a lack of emptiness of somebody's spirit on his mind. Surprising twist. Sense of majestic anthropomorphism of stars as nature.

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