As I Wish! Comments

“When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down ‘happy’. They told me I didn’t understand the assignment, and I told them they didn’t understand life.” -John Lennon This poem is wonderful, thank you.

Wow this is spectacular Really started loving it at Can ye teach me to build mountain and then Is there anyone to ask me? What I want to be! Great and important message! Something all guiding figures should consider and remember.

The right time will come when you least expect it! ! ! Easy....

Hi, I just wrote a big long comment and lost it when I went to post. I love the two lines before the last two. Try reading it with the ending being here. Can ye teach me to build mountain, Or how to dig fountain! Course they can't. Only the inner soul knows it's own mission, but the collective ego of society attempts to box us in. If a child is allowed to fly and run as the hart, not have the imagination an wonder destroyed, then the water of life can explode into the sun a fountain of life... Anyway, I said it better the first time. Just think it has much more of a powerful punch ending there. What do you think?

wah. wonderful, I like this write.

i really like this poem, keep it up