Friday, July 31, 2015

As I Watched You Go Comments

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As I sat on the couch
Feeling my heart race
Trying to catch my breath
Bracing myself for the pain
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Linda Barnes
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2015

Uncertainly without you; with the muse of love and pain. Nice work.

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Linda Barnes 03 August 2015

Thank you for reading my poem. It's always refreshing to receive feedback.

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