As I Watched You Die Comments

Beautiful poem, never stop writing. I hope to see more -A

very sweet kandi, keep writing.you will find a peace come upon you.i have wrote many poems for my wife.so how i think both of them are up there reading our poems together..

This is very beautiful! A deeply touching poem! A natural flow and the repetition of the title is timed well throughout. My eyes are leaky after reading it! Cyber hugs ((()))

A beautiful poem, he will be very proud of your work as he watches over you.

death is not a negation of life..............it is an art................not everybody can do it well........