Friday, September 5, 2008

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Right across my window glass
From where I sat inside my car
Parked aside a village road
Two lads I find beg for alms
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Elena Sandu 17 May 2010

I was just started to wonder..Have you got a poem not to make me smile? .. This one moved the smile into my heart and pulled my heart's tears out..

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 December 2009

Maestro finish…very much touchy and sublime… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

You have a beautiful pair of eyes! Keep using them for kindness' sake and God be with you always. Thank you for this wonderful write.: -)

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Christine Kerr 25 April 2009

Being an observer to such thoughtfulness is a true gift of giving. Thanks for sharing

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Antonio Liao 31 March 2009

I like your poem....a poem of emotion....an emotion within an emotion a true feeling of human endeavor....thank you...God bless my friend

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Sandra Martyres 23 March 2009

This poem is heart wrenching....despite the poverty and hunger the love and caring attitude of the elder sibling doth prevail - 10

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Naidz Ladia 28 December 2008

love to a brother, love to less fortunate, love as a watcher, , , there are kinds of love.. many countries are allowing streets children..they should be in orpahanage so that they would be cared, fed of good food, sheltered, educate..the author is so good to put in words how difficult life is.. i like ths much, , ths s happening, tho i shed tears in my frst attempt but i carry myself and look again ths poem to leave a good comment for a good work of kesav....ur a good poet, u must know that..

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Linda Moore 20 November 2008

Sensitive poem, hungry children and a kind vendor, sadness, so many are hungry in our World today, but God placed it in the vendors heart to help...my heart cries

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Sumita Datta 02 November 2008

Your poem reminds me many sad moments that I also noticed.... Really a very simple but strong expression...it's more of a painting than a poem to me....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

A very nice poem, love it.

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Rani Turton 17 September 2008

This poem is really lovely. Thanks, Kesav.

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Richa Dhodi 17 September 2008

Lovely poem, i really liked it sir. It gives me a true sense of peace and the liaison’s love portrays a remarkable message. Hope people turn their ways like this. And imbibe a helpful gesture. Richa. cheers.

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Monika Marie 16 September 2008

Absolutely inviting. A sure display of what this world can still behold and what it can still become. Charming.

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Seema Aarella 16 September 2008

Its time we all stepped out of our cars(Mental bondage!) And come out on the free roads to live a simple life and find true happiness, of giving and sharing! Thanks for reminding!

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Pallichadath Balasubramanian 16 September 2008

Dear Easwaran, The poem touched my heart. I dont have words to express the feelings. You are not only a poet, but..........what should I say I do not know. You are a great --. You see HIM in all your sights.10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

a fine image has been created.. a sacred feelin touched........thanks

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Jayaprakash Panicker 15 September 2008

As i read what i have got is but a picture transforming into an emotion that we noramally find missing in these 'what is in there for me' days. good sir, reads picture

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 September 2008

Yeahhhh very touchin' n educatin' as well.Love above all no matter what's yer situation was! ! nice work Kesav sahab.shukriya for this.and shabas to u! A+ and 10.

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Satheesan Rangorath 14 September 2008

Dear Easwaran Ji An excellent poem. thought provking, sensible, sensitive, socially relevant and imaginative to the core.Great write/ Greetings Satheesan rangorath

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Seema Chowdhury 13 September 2008

excellent and very touchy and a very truthful bitter reality of life. an excellent poems and good wordings.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

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