Right across my window glass
From where I sat inside my car
Parked aside a village road
Two lads I find beg for alms
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Maestro finish…very much touchy and sublime… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
You have a beautiful pair of eyes! Keep using them for kindness' sake and God be with you always. Thank you for this wonderful write.: -)
Being an observer to such thoughtfulness is a true gift of giving. Thanks for sharing
I like your poem....a poem of emotion....an emotion within an emotion a true feeling of human endeavor....thank you...God bless my friend
This poem is heart wrenching....despite the poverty and hunger the love and caring attitude of the elder sibling doth prevail - 10
love to a brother, love to less fortunate, love as a watcher, , , there are kinds of love.. many countries are allowing streets children..they should be in orpahanage so that they would be cared, fed of good food, sheltered, educate..the author is so good to put in words how difficult life is.. i like ths much, , ths s happening, tho i shed tears in my frst attempt but i carry myself and look again ths poem to leave a good comment for a good work of kesav....ur a good poet, u must know that..
Sensitive poem, hungry children and a kind vendor, sadness, so many are hungry in our World today, but God placed it in the vendors heart to help...my heart cries
Your poem reminds me many sad moments that I also noticed.... Really a very simple but strong expression...it's more of a painting than a poem to me....
Lovely poem, i really liked it sir. It gives me a true sense of peace and the liaison’s love portrays a remarkable message. Hope people turn their ways like this. And imbibe a helpful gesture. Richa. cheers.
Absolutely inviting. A sure display of what this world can still behold and what it can still become. Charming.
Its time we all stepped out of our cars(Mental bondage!) And come out on the free roads to live a simple life and find true happiness, of giving and sharing! Thanks for reminding!
Dear Easwaran, The poem touched my heart. I dont have words to express the feelings. You are not only a poet, but..........what should I say I do not know. You are a great --. You see HIM in all your sights.10++++++++++++++++++++++
a fine image has been created.. a sacred feelin touched........thanks
As i read what i have got is but a picture transforming into an emotion that we noramally find missing in these 'what is in there for me' days. good sir, reads picture
Yeahhhh very touchin' n educatin' as well.Love above all no matter what's yer situation was! ! nice work Kesav sahab.shukriya for this.and shabas to u! A+ and 10.
Dear Easwaran Ji An excellent poem. thought provking, sensible, sensitive, socially relevant and imaginative to the core.Great write/ Greetings Satheesan rangorath
excellent and very touchy and a very truthful bitter reality of life. an excellent poems and good wordings.
I was just started to wonder..Have you got a poem not to make me smile? .. This one moved the smile into my heart and pulled my heart's tears out..