Friday, May 11, 2018

As I Want Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature's child unbridled, creatively gifted
Running wild, sowing seeds by hands
Fertilizing the fallow land with dung
Responsible to no one in my farm
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Doris Cornago
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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 May 2018

Dear Doris, such an excellent poem...10++++

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Doris 12 May 2018

Thank you. I know you'll understand.: -)

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Doris Cornago 11 May 2018

Thank you, Nudershada. But how about the dark thoughts?

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 May 2018

Beautifully constructed write Doris. I love the form and the flow of this poem.10

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