Thursday, November 3, 2016

As I Walked Around The Block Comments

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'As I walked around this block and think
to see the view and let its radiance sink
to the tall buildings and birds that flies
and with people of different paths in life
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Jesus Diaz Llorico 03 November 2016

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak for your comment. Really appreciate it.

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Bharati Nayak 03 November 2016

A beautiful piece of poem expressing deep feelings of sadness.To quote a few lines- - - the winds slowly rising and getting cold as it prepared from the coming winter fold the leaves gently rustling from its trees that for months will weep from the breeze

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