Sunday, April 15, 2007

As I Walk In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

At night I lay awake
And tears fall as I cry
The hurt and pain my heart can't take
Because all your selfish lies
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Natasha Williams
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Tony Fiona 20 April 2007

Very strong poem filled with emotion i know what it is like to walk in the rain it hides your pain when the tears fall like rain Tony D

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Jim Foulk 17 April 2007

a great poem. it is good to get out your feelings

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Madly In Love 15 April 2007

Natasha this is a wonderful poem keep writing

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Natasha Williams

Natasha Williams

Jseup, GA
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