Friday, September 14, 2012

As I Wait......... Comments

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My heart skips with great expectation when I look beyond the hills.
I see a lovely rainbow so vibrant, so alive, and so promising.
As I close my eyes I somehow feel the texture of it.
The rainbow is soft and smooth as grapes.
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Jeanette Telusma
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Rebecca Navarre 13 December 2017

Netty, Oh, How Deeply Breathtakingly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! This Is With Such Incredible Wonderful Feel! ! ! ! ! Again, Ever So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endles1O! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! S+++++

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Jeanette Telusma 19 January 2018

So kind of you, Becca... Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Heart skips with great expectation when I look beyond the hills and realize about promises made. You hear the sound of dream. Rainbow appears to smooth grapes. Waiting will be no more as the day of expectation will come soon. An interesting poem is shared here.10

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Jeanette Telusma 14 October 2017

It's always great hearing from you, Mr. Kumarmani. Thanks for your kind comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2017

Vibrant! ! Hope is the key. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jeanette Telusma 14 October 2017

So kind of you to comment, Edward. Blessings always.

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Godfrey Morris 16 September 2012

They say patience is a virtue. In time all dreams will be realized. Another great write

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Jeanette Telusma 25 August 2017

Thanks for commenting, Godfrey. Stay blessed.

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