As I Used To Be. Comments

Sigh.....Ann this is STUNNING! ! ! . I was captivated from the first stanza to the last. Beautifully poignantly penned...10

An in depth poem of great meaning. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful words, a beautiful write, so captivating, so very very pensive. A very touching piece..10++++

the flow of your words are so lovely, this is a great write, and touching, , that i wanted to read and re read again.Thank you for sharing this, Ann.Take care of you. Hugs from here, Meggie

Sad, sweet and so beautiful. If this is not a 10 there are no 10's. Warm regards Ron

I must say this is a moving and skilled write. metaphors so touching for dementia - thoughts as light as rain. Metre and rhyme without loss of gentle flowing content. Did you deliberately choose to move between iambic and trochee verse for pathos? A poem to be proud of.

Were stronger now, than we yous't ter be!

I love that first verse of your poem Ann! it gripped me!

Oh Ann... your sadness continues.....10derly Deana

Enjoyed the word flow and feelings personified in this piece, Thank you for sharing Ann

A beautifully written piece Ann and so poignant. Love Andrew x

Oh Anne, that is beautiful. Each line plucks strings in my heart as I walk with you. Irene xx

A nicely flowing write Ann, and softly sentimental. A pleasure to read it. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Everything definitely ends one way or another, reminiscing what we used to be with loved ones in younger days are memories worth cherishing! It lightens up our life when loneliness strikes. A 10.

A great read Ann! ! Poignant and powerful, thank you for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

That is so sad and so sweet. Beautiful, Ann, just beautiful. Marilyn