As I Step Back Comments
As I step back and evaluate my life, i notice things that once were hid;
I notice the mean nasty things I'd said, the ugliness of things I did.
I notice that when I was mad at my God, my heart became bitter and cold;
As I step back and look at my life, I watch hardships as they unfold.
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Excellent read Dwayne! Love it! Eloquently expressed! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad
God is your eternal friend & the only love that will never end... very insightful poetry 10 :)
It sounds as though you are back on track with God. Despite the past God does forgive if you ask for it. Beautiful, meaningful and honest piece. Really enjoyed it alot!
When we are in pain we lash out, angry with all about, when thats gone the true self comes out, god knows our true self no matter the words we scream and shout, love is what it's all about... Andrew 10
Hi Dwayne. A fine piece of writting which ryhmes very well. a good read thanks. Regards Dave T
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7/19/2025 11:12:51 PM # 1.0.0
Beautifully written...nice message! regards, mehreen