As I stared at the flame of the candle
A vision I truly did see,
That told of my life and my sadness
And all that had happened to me.
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all the sentiments you have brought beautifully in your poem...thanks Andrew...10
Written with much depth and mind searching. I think I enjoyed the flow you have gien this as it makes one take stock and look at theriself and wonder what their accomplishments are... I have done this too, when I was 35 and remember it well, please look at the glass as half full, rather than half empty. You have accomplished much more than you are aware of my frined, just being you, has gifted us with the pleasure of knowing you... Very nice job and enjoyed this much.. Bonnie
Quite a deep poem Andy, written with a tinge of regret, hauntingly beautiful, 10 Lynda xx
A truly beautiful poem Andrew that is deeply introspective -10++
It's very good and deep poem... Which is more sensitively read on fire of candles.... 10...... Sincerely, Tsira
This is a very moving piece Andrew, a delight to read and so meaningful in its contents. Very well done indeed. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX