As I Sit And Wait Comments

Liked your poem. Don't take any notice of bad comments. Keep up the good work.

rhyming is a bit sloppy, Try to use a little more vocabulary instead of using the first rhyming word that comes into yur head.

umm this is my second poem, and like most of my poems it is about death. So yeah once in a while I will right a happy one but yeah, hope you guys enjoy, leave comments too I love comments!