Thursday, January 21, 2010

As I See You! Comments

Rating: 4.0

As I see you-
My heartbeat skips,
As I see you-
Nothing else I can see,
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anju addanki
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It’s immixing of I and You Oozing romance well penned Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 January 2010

Lovely poem on love. Repetetion brought life into this write.Nice one.

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