Sunday, November 29, 2015

As I See Myself Comments

Rating: 4.7

As I see myself in the mirror,
I think I am the cause of horror;
From dawn to dusk I do my work,
And so I have lost my spark.
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ANJANDEV ROY
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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

My duty is not yet over, As I have a long distance to cover.... This line echoes the duty of life....thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2018

But for me it is a fact of glory; My duty is not yet over, As I have a long distance to cover......it reminded me of Robert Frost's lines. woods and lovely dark and deep, but i have promises to keep.......... thank u for this lovely reminder and wisdom. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 January 2016

A beautiful soliloquy and a sort of introspection through it. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2015

Lovely reflection of self devoid of vain exultation. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful depiction of dignity and passion in working towards one's dream. Thanks for sharing Roy. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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