Tuesday, October 9, 2007

As I Move Away Comments

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The way you've made me feel tonight,
Is undescribable as you hold me tight.
As we walk into the stary sky,
It's together here where we lie.
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sweet girl
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 10 October 2007

Beautiful poem that shares alot of emotion! Terrific sad read with Great imagery throughout! Keep up the Great work........ =Shelley=

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Poison 9901 10 October 2007

Very heart felt poem here Sweet girl, We can only hope that god will watch over them untill once again we can be reunited. Thanks for shareing this lovely piece 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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