Wednesday, July 8, 2009

As I'M Slowly Dying Comments

Rating: 3.5

as i'm slowly dying,
nobody knows it but me.
as i'm slowly dying,
i've never felt so free.
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Hailey Agnew
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 July 2009

Pain and pride beautifully expressed. Keep expressing yourself, Hailey. Best Wishes Naseer

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Danny H 08 July 2009

This was a excellent poem: the words filled with remorse, pain, some regret, pride it was beautiful

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Hailey Agnew

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