Monday, November 17, 2008

As I Look Upon The Ruins Comments

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As I look upon the ruins
My eyes are filled with tears
From memories nestled in my heart
Countless and treasured years
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 20 June 2009

'Oh Lord will you please hold my hand And help me through this pain The farmhouse that my family loved Will no longer be again'... These pearl like lines constitute the nostalgic soul inside this excellent write...thanks Marilyn...10+

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Fiona Davidson 24 November 2008

What a beautiful picture you have painted here of memories and love...sad? Yes but sometimes life is sad...loved reading this...thank you...best regards Fi

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Ann Beard 17 November 2008

Going back can be really sad, you have captured the feeling exactly Marilyn. my husband visited his childhood home early this year, and found it overgrown and in ruins it was expected but still hurt. Thank you for sharing your memories..kind regards Ann.

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