As I Lay Waiting Comments
Ignorance is once again upon me
Embracing me into this impasse
Dissipated clouds witness my reverie
As I take this feeling to a new degree
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a beautiful piece. i loved it. 'ignorance is once again upon me embracing me into this impasse' nice work
'Dissipated clouds witness my reverie' that line hooked me...very nice, a sense of hopelessness and events out of your control in this one...i like the continuous use of action words. great stuff, check out mine if u get a chance
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7/18/2025 3:24:48 PM # 1.0.0
Beautifully written. Keep writing. 8