As I Lay Dying Comments

ahh, i love it! its really good in writing, and i love the meaning

I love this poem. the pain and agony shows real well. and how you must go on and cannot go back.....awwww the pictures in my head are visual. :) great job

I gave this a 6. I could not give it a higher number because if I read a piece three times and cannot decide what is being said by the writing then it is a failure to me. GW62