Tuesday, July 15, 2008

As I Lay Down To Rest Comments

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As i lay down with this frown

I wait
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Mark Chavez
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Greenwolfe 1962 16 July 2008

This is a ponderous soul and one who shall never find happiness until he ponders no more. GW62

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Lacey Unknown 16 July 2008

I really like this poem. Random death in our sleep isn't something that we think about very often, but it is truly a possiblity. It's good that you think about your life and make sure you are living it to the best of your abilities. ~Lacey~

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Mark Nwagwu 16 July 2008

no, Mark, you won't die tonite, not if ytou keep writing about it and thinking about it. And you will hear other stories, get tucked in with other poems roaming in your head.

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