As I Grew Up Comments

the deceptive woman scares a man..a nice shift in concept and imagery..lovely

the power of modern men and women have outpassed that of those in ur child hood stories. be carefull.but sincel humans can adopt changing scenario only caution will do.nice poem.posted 10 for u surya

Wonderful imagery - a lot of pain, very well written

You're really good! I like this one too! The images are vivid and the emotions raw, brilliant.

I am fascinated by what I read and which was written by you! Good imagination which can drive others into what you would want them to see after all! Wow, it is a 10, indeed! ! K.Poornima

nice piece, , , meaningful writes dear..the reality dear is there is a big difference from childhood to adulthood...changes occurs in each stage dear, so as we grew up, our responsibilities grows too..naizz

Amazing poetry. I thought I was reading Tagore's boyhood days. CP

It must have pained you to be so brutally honest, and to that, I take my hat off. I loved it, the visualisation so easily captured, the hope a child can only cling onto, to have his innocence destroyed. Powerful. But I believe your poem doesn't only apply to children, does it?

Mmmm... What else can I say the poem is all nice but please make it be felt by the reader I mean like a rhyme thing. To be honest 7/10

a good write.........a beautiful memoir..........great write. 10 ++

Good write Arumugham...your present your feelings your thoughts as a colorfully painted poem portrait...10

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It is just uniquely beautiful....excellent.......very nice childhood recollections and the reality of life truely portrayed........