Whenever I see the world around me
I see the terrible sights around me
I see children working around me
I see people, starving to death around me
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An excellent ghazal like poem, i want to write ghazals too someday, hardhittin sadenin images here u hav portrayd! Such a wondrful poem. Pls coment my latest, a statue of lib poem.
love for one and love for all: -) universal msg...nice job
Oh very true...you explain what we need, , , thats all true..i like this poem...well done Shamin
i vote 4 dis poem truly the world we can change it not only true our words buh we need to prove this even through our works
Excellent, , well crafted written poem, , yes all what we need is peace for all nations, , again strong poem of strong feelings of struggle, , keep the good work up and go on :) rated 10++++
Superb...The context is well penned, your ideology and the build-up from 'As I raise my voice for plea' is Awe-inspiring! nicely Illustrated. 10/10!
Wonderful and amazing