Sunday, July 1, 2007

As I Feel The Breeze Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I feel the breeze coming from the ocean shore,
I think of how I loved you more and more
As all those days and nights went by
And the seagulls flew across the sky.
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Jeff Fleischer
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Jean Dament 06 January 2011

Quite lovely. The love sure shines in this sweet poem of yours. Thanks for sharing. I gave it a 10. Spiritsong

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Daisy Calder 08 September 2009

one of the greatest poems ever written 10

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beautifuul feeling in a touching poem...

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Jeff Fleischer

Jeff Fleischer

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