Saturday, November 24, 2007

As I Draw Your Lips Deep Into Mine... Comments

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As i draw your lips deep into mine...
I want to draw as well your mind in mine.

We should be as a two lovers agreed to heart...
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Michael Gale
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Fay Slimm 29 November 2008

The first line in this beautiful poem is a so emotive and it resonates with well thought out words..... a connecton between lips and mind leads us into the rest of your lovley love-song...... thank you for this....

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

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