Sunday, May 13, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

The hint of lavender wafts the air,
as we walk around the garden wall.
You are blind, but I can see,
and I describe to you the beauty of it all.
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 19 May 2007

I have to agree with Melvina..a very vivid picture...is this a true story? ...or a hidden meaning? .....either way a great write: O) ....... many of us walk through life with blinders on: O)

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Melvina Germain 18 May 2007

I saw you walking there, the picture is vivid David. Thankyou David for a very beautiful poem. Melvina

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Pam Thomas 16 May 2007

This poem shows the warmth and love that flows with in your heart David and that is what makes you such a wonderful person and an excellent poet. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. XOXO Pam

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Duncan Wyllie 15 May 2007

It comes shining through from here David, thankyou for another great piece Love duncan X

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I can see the beauty in this poem.I can smell lilac as I read this wonder filled peaceful piece of poetry which is very uplifting for the senses... Thanx for the light poetry which puts a smile on ones face to have ventured there even though I am still sitting in my own kitchen on the computer! Thanx for the break........... =Shelley=

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Yes indeed, we are in a very productive ''Diversaverse'' mode on this Mum's Day Sunday, David! From violence to prayer to images as effulgent as a shooting prism....Awesome display of imagework, here, my friend... FjR

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David Taylor 13 May 2007

Nice one David a very delicate touch.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 May 2007

Makes you feel in a summer mood this one...10

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